Sunday, May 10, 2015

He Had Promised His Li'l Ones Comments

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Set out to confront the raging torrents.....
With the fishing net rented...
Hoping to make a catch enough..
To feed three empty stomachs back home.
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Jaishree Nair
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2015

Heart touching poem. Excellent collocation. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.

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Very touching poem. The hungry little ones back home with burning stomachs and their dad being eaten by a shark with their thought burning inside him. Reminded me of the last scene of the Malayalam movie Chemmeen.

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