Thursday, May 18, 2006

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He did not have the time to even whisper
the reasons for that crime against his kin,
there was no room inside my damaged heart
for any mercy or a whiff of past humanity.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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John Kay 18 May 2006

Herbert...I like this one and love the rhyming couplet at the end.

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 May 2006

Harrowing and unforgiving...and understandably so. Dark but strong. G.

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