Tuesday, July 30, 2019

He Fairs Well That Fails Comments

Rating: 5.0

O to know what not and what to trail:
What can't be would not be,
What can be might well be,
A car upon road runs, rail on rail,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Prabir Gayen 02 August 2019

So how plains do now fly, He succeeds that tries as if to fail...very sweet

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Thanks dear reader poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2019

Never giving up! ! ! Always trying to succeed; With hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Thanks indeed dear poet reader

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2019

What can be might well be, A car upon road runs, rail on rail, But boat scarce can on a firm ground sail.......so touching and true. A beautiful poem is well executed. I

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Your feedback is encouraging dear poet reader KM

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2019

A car upon road runs, rail on rail, But boat scarce can on a firm ground sail......amazing expression sir! A wonderful Limerick...........10

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Many thanks for the appreciation Dr Swain.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Thank you for reading and rating the poem Dr Swain.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 July 2019

do now fly, meaningful

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Thanks dear poet GM.

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