Saturday, November 4, 2006

He Drove All Night Comments

Rating: 4.7

I awaken to the sound
Of morning music:
Your deep, soothing voice
Singing in the shower
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Raymond J Wright
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Malcolm Evison 17 November 2006

A beautiful write - a true celebration!

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Unnamed Unnamed 07 November 2006

Holy crap, I love this! Makes it even HARDER for me to wait to marry my bestfriend/girlfriend. I mean, the whole waking-up-and-hearing-her-voice thing is such a perfect...thing. You know? I'm adding this to my favorite-poems list. That makes you the only person on that list who is NOT someone famous!

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Francesca Johnson 07 November 2006

How wonderful. The thought of being with a loved one in front of a roaring fire on a cold, snowy morning (or better still, an evening) .....aahhh, I can but dream. This is a great write, Ray. Love, Fran xx

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m maarouf 04 November 2006

I love the way u described things in this poem. seriosly. nice job: D xxx shereen

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Atmospheric, serene, sensual, tender... a fine write. t x

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Moon Batchelder 04 November 2006

i feel the chill and smell the briskness and almost the warmth of loving nearness...breath upon the nape...your words truly bring one along..

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