Monday, July 2, 2012

He Died Comments

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he died,
And all his world did mourn.
Souls that had known him,
Since the day he had been born.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 04 July 2012

Absolutely a grand and beautiful piece of poetry!

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Eric Cockrell 04 July 2012

beautiful poem.... would that expressions of love were as strong when still alive!

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Barry Jablonski 03 July 2012

Outstanding poem....I really like the way you crafted this poem...it touches me on a personal level! ! ! GREAT EFFORT, keep up the good work! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 03 July 2012

Wonderful poem Juan, I guess we would all like to believe that we were loved after our demise. Very well written and expressed.

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Heather Wilson 02 July 2012

So sad, this seems very personal and heartfelt, the poem had a beautiful ending.

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