He Didn'T Choose You (Arid Desert Iii) Comments

For sure sis, for sure. When the steam settles get up and walk away. I agree with what you have said here sis, this is a very poignant piece. Love & hugs, Barbara

Short lines add punch to this nice piece, beautifully delivered. Thank you June.

There's a winner in you. Beautiful! : -)

La. The wrong woman...I wonder if in her way, she will grieve...for whether we be evil or integrity...we remain to be human...maybe she grieves knowing she was never chosen...the final break of desperation... interesting poem. sounds rather like lyrics...have you tried putting a tune to it?