Thursday, October 1, 2015

He Continues His Walk. Comments

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Walking through the village footpaths
A walking stick always he carries
Looking all nearby with happiness
A smiling face, positive looks
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 October 2015

I salute to the old man ageing gracefully. He is taking life in it's strides and offering an example of positive thinking and enjoying the present to every one around him. In short he is doing everything to make others feel affection and respect for him. Nice narration. Enjoyed reading. Regards.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 01 October 2015

perhaps that is the age when most people realize true values. A happy man is he who can smile, in spite of the fact that only a few years await him. A person who is at peace with himself and everything around him. I see that greed is nowhere in sight for this aged man. if read between the lines, this poem points to one thing.... Money is the root of all evil. I liked it as these lines makes us see where we are heading as years pass. And when someone writes something true and happening it always interests me.

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