Wednesday, September 16, 2015

He Came With My Spirit. Comments

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I am the spirit that roams round the earth
singing with the rives the songs of love
enchanting the memory of ancient glory
like the spiders crafting web-cow and
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 04 January 2019

Excellent write with philosophical undertone.

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Richard Beevor 16 September 2015

excellent poem Mohammed, the final line was a true surprise I had not expected, great writing my friend :)

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T Rajan Evol 16 September 2015

Spiritual poem, It appeared as if your friend was waiting for you to take him along.......Wonderful story of friendship with great imagery.

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much Evol Sir

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Sanjukta Nag 16 September 2015

Oh... it made me speechless. Nothing to say. Keep writing marvellous pieces like this.100

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2015

Somewher around with the muse of life and love. Nice piece.

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