He Broke (Up With) Me Comments

I'm adding your poem to my favorite poem list and you on my favorite poet list because I want to keep my eye on your progress! ! !

Yes, write it as a short story- write it as a poem- -let it be both- -because it works as either. The direct honest approach of this piece is stunning and it won't be forgotten. You've got massive talent- -keep growing it- -keep learning- -keep Your unique voice. I'm going to enjoy seeing you rise! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++

This poem has phrases that tickle a reader's nerve ends, such as " SKILLED STEERSMAN OF EXCITED CLIMATES." More importantly, you showed presence of mind while suffering an emotional blow. You summed up that chapter of life, not forgetting to acknowledge soimething good about him. Your reply was big-hearted, a badge of character.

Whoa! This is very good! You made me feel every emotion! I have four poems, but Poem Hunter has not activated them yet. One was posted day before yesterday. Does it always take this long?