He Broke His Wedding Ring Comments

Mary, great comparison between the ring and marriage... very wise message to end with! Brian

I like poems centring on symbols. This is an excellent one. Yours, Julia

You know Mary, you can melt down the gold for the new ring or perhaps use the pieces as charms on a charm bracelet. Maybe mismatched earrings.... or not. j.

Not too freely! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Another great metaphor on how a relationship should work. Rusty

Mary, I enjoyed this - well written, good flow. I think it's a reflection of his love that he wore it until it broke. Most men would have taken it off at the first sign of discomfort. avr

It is very true Mary, we have to give them enough room to breath freely and grow naturally into marriage. Great little snap shot of life. 10 from smiling at you, Tai