He Breathed His Last Comments
He was born crying
And people around him smiling
To lonely he was a friend
To every one he was godsend
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Enjoyed the climax in your poem.Only one suggestion, avoid repetition.Kind regards, koyel
You have the imagination and capability to express emotions those qualities making you a poet but your language has to improve and should learn the power of words
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7/30/2025 1:30:17 AM # 1.0.0
'HE MET HIS MASTER OF DEATH' Great write Kid. You are just beautiful. What a rhythm, terrific rhymes......every other poet can draw a leaf from u......GOD BLESS U.