Friday, February 23, 2007

He Believes He Is Being Praised Comments

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A fool will never understand,
Why his actions are understood.
He sees this as approval...
And continues to remain a fool.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 23 February 2007

I've contacted L.O.L and suggested a rewrite of her/his comments. It's difficult to take comments like these seriously when the writer, who reprimands 'me' on my writing ability, misspells words. I am sure there was a well thought out intention to provoke anger, however, I could do no more than laugh. Sooo, I'm hopeful Ms/Mr Liberty will resubmit those comments! I'd like to take them seriously as I'm sure they were meant to be that way! 'Someone who corrects me for content and can't spell? '

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poetry lover 23 February 2007

don't fake your poems be real & no one is praising you at all. if you wan't tips on how to write ask Fred gold or Ronald Stroman. don't be the next causalty of war.

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