My snowball-like puppy barks like a bird,
Whenever that sparrow enters my window
Like a sudden sunray of winter.
She perches on a luminous spot
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Thrilling expression. Beautiful and enjoyable poem. Thanks for sharing.
you are the queen of metaphors over here your poetry tells truth and they are pious god bless u sanjukta...!!
A poem that liberates from traditional thinking and enters our body like morning freshness....Metaphor in your poem is brilliant, My puppy flew out of the window is amusing line which took this poem to a different level altogether.................Loved it SN. Rating u know...
An enjoyable write, thanks for sharing