Monday, October 26, 2015

He Barks Like A Bird Comments

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My snowball-like puppy barks like a bird,
Whenever that sparrow enters my window
Like a sudden sunray of winter.
She perches on a luminous spot
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Sanjukta Nag
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Seema Chowdhury 11 November 2015

An enjoyable write, thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Thrilling expression. Beautiful and enjoyable poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Vishal Sharma 29 October 2015

you are the queen of metaphors over here your poetry tells truth and they are pious god bless u sanjukta...!!

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2015

A poem that liberates from traditional thinking and enters our body like morning freshness....Metaphor in your poem is brilliant, My puppy flew out of the window is amusing line which took this poem to a different level altogether.................Loved it SN. Rating u know...

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