Friday, February 13, 2015

He And She Comments

Rating: 5.0

They meet twice a day,
And I see the aurora of the lovers,
In a blue back ground,
She sleeps whole day and awakes with the dusk,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

How to steal a moment of love, From the iron safe of the cruel time! .................a lovely poem on love....

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Amitava Sur 14 February 2015

A lovely imagery on love, written so eloquently which soothes the mind and soul.Thanks for sharing this serenity in love. I extend my hand to you Akhtar Vai.

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Hazel Durham 14 February 2015

I love this stunning write with amazing imagery and inspired lines that sweeps the readers off their feet! Happy Valentine's Day!

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 February 2015

The poem is a beauty in Akhtar Jawad's lovely style...........................10

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Valsa George 13 February 2015

Wish you...... the High Priest of Love on Poem Hunter.... a great day of love and titillating romance!

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