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very beautiful write sir and also read my poem and give any suggession

....very sensitive and beautiful write sir, enjoyed reading this lay full of emotions and feelings

Oh my how amazing the words are well pinned emotions are well measured and how brilliantly it is expressed wonderful sir

Quite an expressive poem written with sensitivity.

very nice............. i also invite u to read my new ones.....

It's nice to read your 'He', a cruel Casanova Pursuing his beautiful dame, the ravishing diva And one day he saw his beauty under blurred vision But felt scorching pain when he found it nothing but illusion Excellent