Thursday, July 16, 2009

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C. P. Sharma
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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

If you didn't wonder you wouldn't be human......always inquisitive, curious.....another good poem Ruthy

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Irene Clark-hogg 30 July 2009

Another interesting statement. Do children not learn more when allowed to make their own mistakes? Kindest Regards, Irene

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Ivor Hogg 28 July 2009

succinct but accurate

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Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009

indeed...but surely in time one realizes every path leads to the same place....

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Sandra Fowler 27 July 2009

I like the Scripture that says: 'Be still and know that I am God.'. Profound write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Reshma Ramesh 26 July 2009

God knows..............haha! !

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Meggie Gultiano 25 July 2009

Well, your lines says it all

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

May be....................

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rago rago 23 July 2009

he is in me.........and the ray of light.........

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Raj Nandy 22 July 2009

Infact the last line could be both a question mark and an exclamation mark! HE is all around and also within us! The vast majority seek- looking without! They may feel that it is the easier way out! Though it is more difficult to delve within! But that is the true way to begin seeking HIM ! Thanks! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Catrina Heart 22 July 2009

A nice senryu written in profoundness............this should all be our question why we all wander when HE is there always omnipresent to our lives!

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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

he is the bridge from known to unknown he is the path that you have been shown he is he and me is me can someday me be he

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2009

paradox- though we can see Him in everything, yet we wander. Restlessness brought out beautifully. Mamta

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The lines say it all as other poets have commented. Just why do we? Very thought provoking poem with excellent wisdom. 10 Karin Anderson

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very wise three lines sir..puts one into deep thoughts

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 July 2009

A very deep thoughts you shared, Sir a mind-working, heart-seeking question... very true...He is omnipresent but why do we wander...? He is always trying to reach us but we continue to go away.. He even send our savior but still we run away... thanks for sharing... 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Onelia Avelar 17 July 2009

It is so short and true, the message of the three lines so clear... Why should it be longer?

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Brishti Mazumdar 16 July 2009

So true...I adore your thought...It is necessary to spread this message...10++++++

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Rakesh Bedi 16 July 2009

Sir, i'm of same thinking; He being omnipresent, why should people wander? ? ?

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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