Wednesday, August 20, 2008

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He pushed her up, against the wall
He tore her dress, he ripped her soul
She felt his power
He sensed her fear
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Bjorn Visser
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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 September 2008

Interesting, touchy poem.

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Tanya Stanford 31 August 2008

Wow is this really dramatic and frightening. Good composition. You definately had me feel anger and rage for this maniacs actions. Well done.

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Bjorn Visser

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