Thursday, February 21, 2008

He Comments

Rating: 5.0

He touches me so soft and sweet,
he's the one I'm going to keep,
he kisses my lips so sweet and nice,
he always gives me good advice,
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Samarah Essler
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Jane 92 16 December 2008

wow this one is nice i loved it its just so realistic i can almost imagine the scenes well penned

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Melvina Germain 01 March 2008

Very nice flow Samarah and the rhyming is consistent, you seem to do it with ease. I like the content as well, very good indeed. Melvina

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Samarah Essler

Samarah Essler

Calgary AB
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