Friday, June 1, 2007

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When the sun bleeds
On and through the window panes
Indiscriminately so
Him tasting of my sour skin
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Cin Sweet
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Malini Kadir 01 April 2008

Sun bleeds on and on.......indiscriminately he behind your back........written beautifully

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Fred Babbin 07 January 2008

it's one of those poems that leaves me asking lots of questions.

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Marci Made 01 June 2007

Lot of depth, lots said in just a few lines........wow, this is great........marci. :)

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Lynn Rowe 01 June 2007

Great write, Cin. Sincerely, Lynn Rowe

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