words filled-obscurity
spilling over...
satiate the silent thunder
of my yearning,
...
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An incredibly strong and emotional poem. The word selection is simply wonderful. To be frank, I truly can not find the words to express my admiration for this poem - your ‘unstoppable’ leaves me speechless. A true 10!
i wished i was that vortex, sweeping the fragments......wow candice! ! ! ..you swept me away! ! ! ! !
the eyes... that hold the moment, ordinary eyes can't see a tranparent body I LIKED THOSE LINES VERY MUCH