Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Hazy Murmur (Unstoppable) Comments

Rating: 5.0

words filled-obscurity
spilling over...
satiate the silent thunder
of my yearning,
...
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Alice Cuenca
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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

the eyes... that hold the moment, ordinary eyes can't see a tranparent body I LIKED THOSE LINES VERY MUCH

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

A lovely poem, very eloquent and definitely a great vocab

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Stone Granite 09 July 2008

An incredibly strong and emotional poem. The word selection is simply wonderful. To be frank, I truly can not find the words to express my admiration for this poem - your ‘unstoppable’ leaves me speechless. A true 10!

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Ying Escalona 08 July 2008

i wished i was that vortex, sweeping the fragments......wow candice! ! ! ..you swept me away! ! ! ! !

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