Hazy Murmur (Unstoppable) Comments

the eyes... that hold the moment, ordinary eyes can't see a tranparent body I LIKED THOSE LINES VERY MUCH

A lovely poem, very eloquent and definitely a great vocab

An incredibly strong and emotional poem. The word selection is simply wonderful. To be frank, I truly can not find the words to express my admiration for this poem - your ‘unstoppable’ leaves me speechless. A true 10!

i wished i was that vortex, sweeping the fragments......wow candice! ! ! ..you swept me away! ! ! ! !