Hazy Dreams Comments

...a fine composition indeed.................10

Wonderful imagery made the poem beautiful.10.

'what's the use of daylight? when my eyes are blocked with the thought of you...' quite possibly one of the best things I've read...absolutely hit me right where it should...great work

this is a definite 10... you express it so well....

words of verse and love made it the breeze carries it and lingering almost feeling your presence...

Wonderful flowing piece of lushes loveliness.....brilliantly composed '10+ best wishes Jon.

very well expressed and i like the fact that words flow from the quill of your mind and fill the pages of the readers heart leaving behind an indelible mark.

nice piece of poetry! ! ! you totally described how I felt (or most people would have felt) when they're in love! ! ! thank you! !

Hi Candice, thanks for pointing me in the direction of this beautiful poem about love. These lines did it for me the most. 'my heart stretches like gossamer webs, we bridge over... distance has no meaning.' Because such love has no boundaries. You describe with vivid imagery how two souls can be joined no matter the distance, even death has no boundaries in he wake of such a love. Great work. Smiling at you, knowing exactl what you are saying here, and it is true, so true. Tai

Candy sweet honey words flowing here from the first line to the last: 'Words cast shadows, the breeze carries it and lingering almost feeling...'

I have given it a 10, it is most enjoyable...

Wonderful imagery. Your poem is wrought with such feeling it is palatable. Excellently done. I particularly love this: I am a leaf on a pond the sky submerged look down! against the sky I am flying in a topsy-turvy world As good as it gets - Stone

magandang tula ito kapatid. You keep me enchanted with it. best wishes and take care, melvin