Friday, September 23, 2005

Hazel Eyes Comments

Rating: 2.3

'Twas never tenderness
nor something in myself
that prompted me to do
what you found so adorable.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 23 September 2005

Very nice...I enjoyed reading it! I had to take asecond look at the supercalifragilistic in it though....interesting.

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Mary Nagy 23 September 2005

Very lovely poem Herbert. I never thought I'd read a poem with the word supercalifragilistic in it! That's a tough one to fit.......made me laugh. Sincerely, Mary

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