Our hearts unfold, secrets reveal,
And we just now barely started
Trudging down the aisle of life,
Each (one)lonesome and half-hearted
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Kim Barney reports below of this poet's death, shortly after he has crossed our paths. Could this be another famous/infamout hoax foisted upon this site?
Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars Full Score for this amazing finest poem. I have enjoyed tremendously. Thank you for sharing
Christopher, heartiest congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day. I'm so sorry that you weren't still around to see it, since you passed away just less than one month ago!
You can see for yourself. Just google 'Christopher Aaron obituary'.
favorite lines: 'Is contingent upon -the kindling and coal— In the coffers of the steamship.' Is 'prison' to be taken literally or figuratively? 5 stars. bri : )
stanza 5: 'And trade my life for a lovely lass? My freedoms, no more scent of? ' '. Truly, there is change to be exected (for better or worse) when two become 'one'.
(cont.) OK, I don't mind & I kind of like it. I mean the 'old' comments' dates. Now maybe I should read the poem? ?
How is it that this is a P of the D in Sept.2022, yet almost all comments I read this day are 'posted' as from 2019? ? ? bri : )
A nice positive poem in this struggling world.
Part 2. I just remembered the inimitable song Heather by Conan Grace. Listened to it once again. Thank You.
This poem, I remember, was Selena's Poem Of The Day, some time in 2019. Now again, it wins a POD. WELL DESERVED. Beautiful
excellent poetic expression- Two souls (soles) impassioned to be one, Like leather sewn together Still colored buff, but more mature, Our hides (heads) not yet stained heather // written greatly
sorry to reply so late, but thanks for reading and for your eval.
An amazing poem- - the love as well as the doubts and apprehensions of a newly married couple are finely expressed in this poem.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day!
An excellent romantic life song narrating ripening of courtship as also relationship posing a few unnecessary questions in the evening of life.Heartiest congratulations on well deserved poem oof the Day.
Doubts and Questions Natural in Love and Life but comes the peace and tranquility after the storms This is a great poem about love and life, thanks poet.
The first of the two! ! ! 👫😍 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Such a beautiful poem. All the expectations and apprehension of a couple in love taking a big leap for marriage vows. Congratulations for a well deserved place.
Kim Barney reports below of this poet's death, shortly after he has crossed our paths. Could this be another famous/infamout hoax foisted upon this site?
Never doubt my word, Bri. This Poet does not lie.