Saturday, February 10, 2018

Hayden And Heather Comments

Rating: 4.7

Our hearts unfold, secrets reveal,
And we just now barely started
Trudging down the aisle of life,
Each (one)lonesome and half-hearted
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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

Kim Barney reports below of this poet's death, shortly after he has crossed our paths. Could this be another famous/infamout hoax foisted upon this site?

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Kim Barney 12 September 2022

Never doubt my word, Bri. This Poet does not lie.

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bri edwards 12 September 2022

Kim Barney reports below of this poet's death, shortly after he has crossed our paths. Could this be another famous/infamout hoax foisted upon this site?

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Kim Barney 12 September 2022

You doubt my word? Why, how absurd!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2022

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars Full Score for this amazing finest poem. I have enjoyed tremendously. Thank you for sharing

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Kim Barney 11 September 2022

Christopher, heartiest congratulations on having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day. I'm so sorry that you weren't still around to see it, since you passed away just less than one month ago!

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Kim Barney 12 September 2022

You can see for yourself. Just google 'Christopher Aaron obituary'.

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

Readers, read the Poet's Notes! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

favorite lines: 'Is contingent upon -the kindling and coal— In the coffers of the steamship.' Is 'prison' to be taken literally or figuratively? 5 stars. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

stanza 5: 'And trade my life for a lovely lass? My freedoms, no more scent of? ' '. Truly, there is change to be exected (for better or worse) when two become 'one'.

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

What's with 'hides (heads) '? ?

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

(cont.) OK, I don't mind & I kind of like it. I mean the 'old' comments' dates. Now maybe I should read the poem? ?

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2022

How is it that this is a P of the D in Sept.2022, yet almost all comments I read this day are 'posted' as from 2019? ? ? bri : )

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N N P Parameswaran Nasarudheen 11 September 2022

A nice positive poem in this struggling world.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 11 September 2022

Part 2. I just remembered the inimitable song Heather by Conan Grace. Listened to it once again. Thank You.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 11 September 2022

This poem, I remember, was Selena's Poem Of The Day, some time in 2019. Now again, it wins a POD. WELL DESERVED. Beautiful

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 February 2019

excellent poetic expression- Two souls (soles) impassioned to be one, Like leather sewn together Still colored buff, but more mature, Our hides (heads) not yet stained heather // written greatly

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Christopher Aaron 08 January 2020

sorry to reply so late, but thanks for reading and for your eval.

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Bharati Nayak 21 February 2019

An amazing poem- - the love as well as the doubts and apprehensions of a newly married couple are finely expressed in this poem.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 February 2019

An excellent romantic life song narrating ripening of courtship as also relationship posing a few unnecessary questions in the evening of life.Heartiest congratulations on well deserved poem oof the Day.

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Rajnish Manga 21 February 2019

This is such a joy to read this romantic poem. Thanks.

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Benjamin Uy 21 February 2019

Doubts and Questions Natural in Love and Life but comes the peace and tranquility after the storms This is a great poem about love and life, thanks poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 February 2019

The first of the two! ! ! 👫😍 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 21 February 2019

Such a beautiful poem. All the expectations and apprehension of a couple in love taking a big leap for marriage vows. Congratulations for a well deserved place.

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