Monday, April 25, 2016

Hawthorn Dene Comments

Rating: 5.0

The April afternoon
Dared us to enter this secret place
Closing the lids of sad eyes
To capture memories in our floodlit minds;
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Paul Reed
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Tom Billsborough 25 April 2016

Your description of that secret dell reminds me of a place near where my mother was born in the valley of the River Brock in Northern EnglandThere was a profusion of wild garlic and bluebells in the woods surrounding, the small river. Your description is very evocative and refreshing, a true breath of Spring. It's worth a ten without doubt. Tom Billsborough

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