Monday, May 8, 2006

Hawk's Reprieve Comments

Rating: 3.8

A young hawk surveys
the mise-en-scene
from a fence post.
Post-prandial, quarry
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Sonny Rainshine
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R H 08 May 2006

A contemplative write, thoroughly enjoyed the use of imagery- particularly liked these lines: 'Red poppies are rocked by the breeze to sleep in their grassy cradle.' Kind regards, Justine

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I really enjoyed this poem. I also love to watch a poet swagger with a command of vocabulary: -)

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