Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Hawk's Eye Comments

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Beyond the grasp of the crimson light,
Beyond the reach of the gurgling waves
I saw a bird of majestic eyes
Looking down the branch knitted maze.
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CHETAN PANDEY
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Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

A very well written poem Chetan.. Thanks for sharing..

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Kelly Kurt 04 November 2015

An epic and nicely written poem, Chetan. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2015

In the weeds; but, let us watch our respective steps in life. Nice work.

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Chetan Pandey 03 November 2015

A poem with sudden twists in its story and based on the recurring events on hunting taking place in the forests or used to take when hunting was a popular sport

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