Thursday, January 4, 2018

Hawk Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fluttering bodies silhouetted across the flaming sunset,
disorientated by the approaching darkness.
Swiftly yet languidly gliding towards a roost.
A safe haven for the night,
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Shaun Cronick 28 September 2020

Lodigiana a hawk eye and bird of prey hunter indeed. Loved how you wrote and delivered your thought provoking fine poem. Thought provoking and one I can personally relate to, for at the museum we have a dove house once 160 strong years ago and as of today only 7 remain alive. For we have Red Kites birds of prey that hold dominance above our skies. That's life, that's nature. Five stars and thank you Lodigiana. Take care. Shaun.x. .

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