Hawk Eye Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Hawk Eye

Rating: 5.0


Fluttering bodies silhouetted across the flaming sunset,
disorientated by the approaching darkness.
Swiftly yet languidly gliding towards a roost.
A safe haven for the night,
tucked away within the branches and
hidden from hungry predators.
Red tailed hawks endlessly circling, beady eyes scanning.
Purpose and intent all too evident.
Like a child's kite meandering across the sky,
he hovers
patiently,
waiting.
Eyes never leaving the ground, like a supplicant at prayer.
Freedom's air weaving through their veined wings.
They dominate the air, dominate the day.
Yet impotent under the cloak of each nights embrace.

Hawk Eye
Thursday, January 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,hunting,night,safe,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 28 September 2020

Lodigiana a hawk eye and bird of prey hunter indeed. Loved how you wrote and delivered your thought provoking fine poem. Thought provoking and one I can personally relate to, for at the museum we have a dove house once 160 strong years ago and as of today only 7 remain alive. For we have Red Kites birds of prey that hold dominance above our skies. That's life, that's nature. Five stars and thank you Lodigiana. Take care. Shaun.x. .

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