The graceful swooping hawk,
Takes a struggling rabbit in its claw,
Then tears it apart with beaked jaw.
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i would add an s at the ends of claw and jaw. one claw ain't much to hold a dagnabit rabbit! and one jaw might feel lonesome. :) and the rhyme is still yours! i know what ya mean about death and nature, BUT i assure you some folks would say..............well, various things, Like: leave the poor deer alone! can't you eat a veggieburger at the cafe? and a hawk doesn't have a credit card to use at a dagnabit cafe! nice thinking and nice rhyming. to MyPoemList. bri :)
oh, yeah, i like the titular alliteration! OK! maybe titular is not the correct word [i just checked]; it ain't. but i still like titular. kind of titillating, isn't it? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - from online source, of course! : tit·u·lar ˈtiCHələr/ adjective adjective: titular 1. holding or constituting a purely formal position or title without any real authority. the queen is titular head of the Church of England synonyms: nominal, in title only, in name only, ceremonial, honorary, so-called; More token, puppet the titular head of a university (of a cleric) nominally appointed to serve a diocese, abbey, or other foundation no longer in existence, and typically in fact having authority in another capacity. 2. denoting a person or thing from whom or which the name of an artistic work or similar is taken. the work's titular song synonyms: eponymous, identifying the book's titular hero denoting any of the parish churches in Rome to which cardinals are formally appointed. the priests of the titular churches Origin - - - - - - - - - - - - - - bri :)