Monday, February 12, 2007

Hawk Comments

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A brilliant white
A shocking swath
Streaking down, crossing sight
Bearing bellies black as night.
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Rosa Linger
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Landrey 16 February 2007

seems like you are copying what's his name Tennyson's 'the eagle' ...until the last stanza when you bring out the question of the strong solitude of the hawk. -landrey

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