Monday, July 28, 2008

Having Fun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whistling roof-ward here we come
Bristling life and full of fun.
Rip off tiles and tear at pots
Whip up trees and blast the tops.
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Fay Slimm
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Chase the dogs and claw the cats. Play with washing on the line. Rock the boat and swing the sign. Fly past kites and break the string. Mad March winds must have their fling.... all with fun and joy rides.. it is beautiful poem gifted with good words and thoughtful one...10 read mine.. funny one, , , , , mary to marry and miss i miss u with butterflies around

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Sid John Gardner. 24 November 2008

Just love your poetry Fay...this one brightened me up... Sid xxx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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