Sunday, February 7, 2010

Haven'T You Wondered? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever wondered what love feels like
The feeling for passion,
The feeling for pleasure
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Krissy Alley
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Kayleen Satsuma 21 February 2010

hi, its Punkrooster1210 from YA! thanks so much for your reviews. i really like this poem a lot. i can definitely relate to the feelings of wondering and not knowing. its sort of like a longing. as you can tell im a lot better at writing poems than reviewing them. lol

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Sandra Dodd 09 February 2010

good you wrote this is the zone your writers brain your unsafe ungaurded space Never write a word without being there, Let it flow dont edit dont think just touch the keys heart to keyboard, never stopping, GOOD POEM of the writing process we all do it differently Mine is expressed in Do Not Kip Tonight on my page

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