Thursday, December 3, 2009

Haven’t We All! Comments

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Haven’t we all waned
Milked our mother and soothe starve

Haven’t we all witnessed the sun drift away
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Abdullah Musa
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Saadat Tahir 20 April 2011

beautifully said liked your style, language and the idea... very nice cheers

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Obinna Eruchie 06 December 2009

A piece with fine expression of an insight that suggest a question asking man if at all he ever learns from nature and life.

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Doha Ewiess 05 December 2009

Very nice imagination...you are open minded...the poem has a lotta wonderfull expressions...and i don't think there are noticable mistakes...not at all..an amazing expressive piece...you are a very good writer =)

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