Haven’t we all waned
Milked our mother and soothe starve
Haven’t we all witnessed the sun drift away
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A piece with fine expression of an insight that suggest a question asking man if at all he ever learns from nature and life.
Very nice imagination...you are open minded...the poem has a lotta wonderfull expressions...and i don't think there are noticable mistakes...not at all..an amazing expressive piece...you are a very good writer =)
beautifully said liked your style, language and the idea... very nice cheers