Wednesday, August 14, 2013

'Have You Met Life? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have.
It was too close to me.
I felt it in my breath
It touched me and I touched it.
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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

a nice poem. giving a voice to life. I like this very much. It says a lot taste me feel me try to touch me and never reject me

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Nader Baheri 17 August 2013

this is the life in a jeopardy.we live our lives.we want to know it.soon we get older we know that we have not lived our lives and we have not known it yet. wonderful i enjoy it~nb

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Lucifera Santez 14 August 2013

a wonderful piece depicting liveliness. I am here for short time so, enjoy me, love me taste me and feel me Try to touch me and never reject me.' lovely lines. please read some of mine. :)

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