Have you ever felt the way I do? 
Sad
Lonely
And frightened?
                
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Poetry brings pleasure and it brings ' emotional torture ' as well. You have a very good poetic sensibility. Every sensetive soul goes through the feelings you have expressed. Please keep writing the way you feel and see the things. I would recommend you to read my poem ' Where Did You See Her '. I hope you will find it worth reading. Best Wishes Naseer
This is great Cheylee. A little dark and definitely different. You have a style all your own. Nice job.