have you ever stayed awake
through many haunted dreams
have you ever whispered out
all your anguished screams
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please wake me when eyes are wide open...wow...you hypnotized me...great thoughts Cathy.....keep the pen moving
The rhyme is pretty on. There are a few words that I would get rid of because of flow issues in a couple of places, but all in all it is really good It reminds me of some of the earlier stuff I used to write. Keep up the good work
The answer is yes to all those questions, if the answer is no then you have'nt lived voted Love Chris