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imagery was great, message hard to understand... Dan SwabLess than a minute ago great imagery and vocabulary. however, sometimes i feel your message was weakened by your choice of words. for example 'if i can not be moon, but certainly help soon' i didn't understand what you meant. other stanzas were great, such as the one about building a hut, to have liberty and freedom. great vocabulary which painted a picture in my head... i didn't understand some of your wording though Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is little silent but meaning that i can provide silver light n coolness

Have you ever witnessed? Fall of leaves on ground