Have you ever felt
Lost and alone
With people all around
And known as none
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Personal feelings have been tried to universalise. Awesome write............
I can actually relate to this one... This shows great emotion..
A very strong powerful poem with amazing imagery. Thanking yu for allowing me to read it. Karin Anderson
Weeping blood tears Drops inside Echoing music puts lashes On your soul Tearing away all your Last hopes wonderful imagery as i am aloneand lonely , love seemingly shadowed soul yet swells by new hope...........superb wtrite. acroos passion of tears,10+++, thanks for sharing
Wonderful creation, a very nice thought! ! ! keep up the good work :)
Wow... Bro... I simply loved it... It provokes thoughts, beautfiul content dealt with masterful simplicity and a I am having a great feeling after reading this poem... Thanks for sharing...
interesting poem, touch the feeling, wish u all the best
yes, i have.... very true...we all went through these tough times but life keeps going...10 Hataw
Very much so, I wonder why In a world of Billions we still feel that feeling.. Andrew 10
Yes I have seen loneliness walking around every where.....even in dreams....But there is another brighter and broader side as well. Please do read my poem 'Where Did You See Her? ', You may feel some comfort.
yes asif I have felt this way too nice write and +10 regards anju (do read mine Cupid)
yes Asif, thiss is life with its bitter realities where it leaves you alone to face it all.well written.
always, when promises made were ruthlessly broken....when faith and hope had me forsaken....when love, with trust was not been taken....! ! ! ! ! but time keeps changing and we slowly learn to love our tears and become friends with pain.............a nice piece of work!
Yes, sometimes i feel devastated too, thinkin of life's infidelity but what the heck, we got to move on! ! ! this is what i would call a poetry! ! good writes Asif!
that descibes me a lot.. but only inside if people would see that they would wanna run and hide like I do. this brought back memories of something that changed me. It hurt to read this... very good job. Becca