Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Have You Ever-1 Comments

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Have you ever felt
Lost and alone
With people all around
And known as none
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Asif Baloch
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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

that descibes me a lot.. but only inside if people would see that they would wanna run and hide like I do. this brought back memories of something that changed me. It hurt to read this... very good job. Becca

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Gargi Saha 26 November 2008

Personal feelings have been tried to universalise. Awesome write............

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Estevan Martin 18 November 2008

I can actually relate to this one... This shows great emotion..

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Emo Seb 18 November 2008

awesome. full of emotion. keep it up.

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A very strong powerful poem with amazing imagery. Thanking yu for allowing me to read it. Karin Anderson

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Annie Girl 16 November 2008

yes to all..... haha very good work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 November 2008

Weeping blood tears Drops inside Echoing music puts lashes On your soul Tearing away all your Last hopes wonderful imagery as i am aloneand lonely , love seemingly shadowed soul yet swells by new hope...........superb wtrite. acroos passion of tears,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Sunand Sharma 16 November 2008

Wonderful creation, a very nice thought! ! ! keep up the good work :)

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Dr Kamran Haider 16 November 2008

Wow... Bro... I simply loved it... It provokes thoughts, beautfiul content dealt with masterful simplicity and a I am having a great feeling after reading this poem... Thanks for sharing...

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Mohammed Albalushi 16 November 2008

interesting poem, touch the feeling, wish u all the best

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Kite Remedy 16 November 2008

Nice meaning you put into you stanzas.. nice works..

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Kesav Easwaran 15 November 2008

good write...expressive exploding...thanks Aijaz...10

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Iram Jamil 14 November 2008

Remarkable words.. Keep on writing.

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Little Hatila ;) 10 November 2008

yes, i have.... very true...we all went through these tough times but life keeps going...10 Hataw

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2008

Very much so, I wonder why In a world of Billions we still feel that feeling.. Andrew 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 06 November 2008

Yes I have seen loneliness walking around every where.....even in dreams....But there is another brighter and broader side as well. Please do read my poem 'Where Did You See Her? ', You may feel some comfort.

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Anjali Sinha 05 November 2008

yes asif I have felt this way too nice write and +10 regards anju (do read mine Cupid)

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Seema Chowdhury 04 November 2008

yes Asif, thiss is life with its bitter realities where it leaves you alone to face it all.well written.

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Seema Aarella 04 November 2008

always, when promises made were ruthlessly broken....when faith and hope had me forsaken....when love, with trust was not been taken....! ! ! ! ! but time keeps changing and we slowly learn to love our tears and become friends with pain.............a nice piece of work!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 November 2008

Yes, sometimes i feel devastated too, thinkin of life's infidelity but what the heck, we got to move on! ! ! this is what i would call a poetry! ! good writes Asif!

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