Monday, July 16, 2012

Have You Been There! Comments

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Everyone lurking out
With deathly silence
The sun like an unchaste wife
Appears on the threshold
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AMITAVA MAZUMDAR
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Captain Cur 16 July 2012

and you wrote your way out. Great poem, loved the metaphors you used. The sun like an unchaste wife, brilliant.

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