Have We Met Before? Comments

'Whom I have looked for in fleeting sands of hour glass (From eon to eon) ' What (who) is it that we search for from eon to eon? Are we searching for our own awareness, that evasive something that eludes us yet pull us ever onward? A deeply introspective piece, Rehan.

a very touching words..dreamy one..wonderful feelings..10+++++

a very touching words..dreamy one..wonderful feelings..10+++++

have we? ? ? ? wow A celestial melody A heart felt prayer, A nexus ‘tween Imperfection of reality And perfection Of dreams a lovely poem +++10 anjali

ok wow! ..were i to rate your work this would definitely be the topper! ...marvelllous...unbelievably marvelous...so softly yearning and perfect in its innocent rhythm.E X C E L L E N T!

This peom is for those who know and enjoy the prime art of manipulating imagery with words. A perfect start.... 'A nexus ‘tween Imperfection of reality And perfection Of dreams ' ....everlasting wonderful lines

A whisper of a melody Among pounding drums A lilting tune As low as a hum A hint of a symphony Meant to be heard The sweetest notes As pure as a jay bird Little person, Come bask in my sun Ill show you the heavens One by one There it starts My tune reached your heart Beating in time You can’t tell them apart :) loved your poem

It's like a I can hear the melody when I read it... lovely poem.

perfect piece of art

I loved this Rehan, it has such a dream-like quality to it. I especially like the idea of a song in some unheard oflanguage - I can't help but imagine what it might sound like. Hugs Anna xxx

I was just waiting for this...after all those short poems with brief verses, I knew you could do the same magic at length and you have just proved your might! Excellent work...keep writing!

after all the search, it's worth the conclusion...the last stanza, rehan! cheer