Friday, April 19, 2013

Have'Nt Happend Yet. Comments

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I wish the past could be again just like it was before,
it feels just like a giant wave crashing on the shore.

the feelings hit me all at once and slowly wash away,
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norman ayres
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Gayleen Boren 23 April 2013

I like this poem, while you feel and remember the past you know you need to move towards the future.. :)

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Valerie Dohren 23 April 2013

There is always hope for the future, memories still to be created. A nice write Norman.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 April 2013

greatest memories have not happened yet. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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