Wednesday, April 25, 2018

Have Mercy Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hepless trees looking at the sky
for a drop of water to soothe it's roots
No leaves to balm the burns on the bark
Rays of sun is left to hides it's nudity
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Rini Shibu
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2018

To hide its nudity! ! With the muse of the fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

A beautiful poem Rini, stay always blessed! .....................10

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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2018

A touching poem, we all need water, so we pray for the rains.

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Lamar Cole 25 April 2018

Great poem about trees.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such cry is the same plea in our place during dry season... well expressed poem...10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 25 April 2018

Rini, this little poem has trees in its sight. Their plight is hightlighted and cries out for water.+++10

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