Wednesday, December 26, 2007

Have I Gone Too Far? Comments

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Does my intensity bother you?

Does my longing make you step back and wonder why?
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Anita Atina
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Greenwolfe 1962 09 February 2008

I do not call this a poem, I call it prose. But don't be misled by that, because this is how I have to judge it to be fair to you. This is a very, very well written piece of prose. You say, in the fewest words, about the most that can be said. This is a gift, not something you learn. I congratulate you. You should be a screen writer. Greenwolfe 1962

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Emancipation Planz 06 February 2008

Certainly not.. reading on from 'Half Truths'.. courage, compromise, conciliation are all connected to commitment via communication and that is what you have done here..

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Fred Babbin 30 December 2007

This is what I call a luv pome, but sometimes we have to write them. The poem itself is something like it's title; a little too prosaic for my taste.

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