Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Have I Ever Told You... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have i ever told you
of the sparkle in your eyes?
Or how the tears you shed
turn to silk when you cry?
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Vincent Feliciano
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Annette Aitken 29 December 2016

Vincent.. this reads beautifully, it flows with the grace that your words carry. Annette

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Vincent Feliciano 29 December 2016

Thank you Seamus, you are kind, but I read your pens searching for the formula you seem to have...I'm a little jealous but a huge fan

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Seamus O Brian 23 December 2016

Stirring and lyrical tribute to true beauty. Tears turning to silk is just wondrous imagery. Delightfully 10+. :) S

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 March 2016

Sobering beauty! Nice work.

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Aira Olayvar 07 January 2010

To me it is intriguing… it seems that the beauty of your lady has tamed a heart of a poet guy… hehe… May be then, she is very beautiful… and hey! You might have forgot to tell her… utter this poem now ok? You can tell it face to face in a loud and clear manner… :)

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Jhane Reyes 07 January 2010

sweet and expressive..its wonderful piece! ! ! ! love it

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Jhane Reyes 07 January 2010

sweet and expressive..its wonderful piece! ! ! ! love it

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Briana Doni 06 January 2010

BEAUTIFUL! just amazing its just so beautiful! 10+++

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Vincent Feliciano

Vincent Feliciano

Bronx, NY
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