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hi this is indeed a smooth poem, rhymes giving it a nice song like feel. Simple words used with perfection to add depth to the meaning...connects well with life and experiences therein...good one...read my poem called ' LET HER NOT SACRIFICE ANYMORE'

a wonderful poem...yes a distressed soul needs a kind caress...in your poem rhyme and emotion flow beautifully well....read my 'am not just a drop' page 1

heartfelt pleading good poetic...deserves a lot more than 'a little'! ...i liked the expression 'anew' there...it hides a lot of emotions inside...10