Careful what you wish for
not all dreams are made to own.
You build a wall around you
no surprise you're now alone
Be careful who you turn to
when you wander off life's track.
Control will keep you prisoner
and you'll find there's no way back
Be careful who you heed to,
whose words you think are true,
with tales that have no substance
all designed to brainwash you
Be careful when you're needy
they sense that you are weak.
The words they feed your mind with
are the only ones you speak
Be careful when you hurt me
my emotions torn apart
You wound without a conscience
and destroy a loving heart
A beautiful poem on many lessons one has to learn to have a good life. Very well crafted and with a sweet flow and rhyming. Loved it. 'Be careful when you hurt me my emotions torn apart You wound without a conscience and destroy a loving heart '... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so very much Anil....It makes me so happy that my writing touches others hearts
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
with tales that have no substance all designed to brainwash you no need to thank here we will not return to read one of mine now its your turn no need t
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