Sunday, June 17, 2012

Haunting Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Their shadows haunt you
their memories engulf you

They are the living dead
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Dave Alan Walker
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Persian Khushi 30 June 2012

love this poem, i can relate. i can hear them i can see them...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 June 2012

I know the feeling.

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Karen Sinclair 23 June 2012

A haunting write which grabs the innards and twists.. to me this can be seen two ways, the living who don't live but survive or the stronger candidate, those who have left before us. A great write as it got me the reader emotionally involved... tyvm for sharing karen

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 June 2012

People who have to see the haunted images are wearing talisman to protect themselves from the evil spirit. Those who still not yet acquired such talisman of wealth, are viewing them, Dave! I do not see anything behind you or your countries which have destroyed the peace of many people all around the world. any way nice poem! .

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Heather Wilson 19 June 2012

Creepy, I`m looking over my shoulder right now, I can feel them, good one.

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Captain Cur 18 June 2012

It's hard for a spectral creature to give himself away. I don't rattle chains, I rattle brains. Good write.

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Eric Cockrell 17 June 2012

or even inside you... haunting, and good!

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