Haunted Verses Comments

A other kind of world in your poem, its fearful but attract outer creature inside the darkness

Yes. I find it quite invigorating my friend! The inner conflict of a man who is in front of N number of choices (Parden my language as some 'unpoetical' words and uses may creep in) . The conflict of who we are and what we want to be. The inner psychopath inside every one! This is defenitely an exceptional poem! Enjoyed much!

Raw human conscience...In various shades of deep, deep red...Intoxicating imagery...10++++

lovely...............another great work of yours...............reveals how the humankind has lost its conscience.......truly true :)

the world as a whole with its devastating nature is reflected here...nice poem

Another good one but now I'd like to see something of yours that is a little more lighthearted and fun, something funny. Readers like myself need to be uplifted after the storm ;)

Amazing job. The feel of crude reality done by human beings, taking its path to destruction. Gives me a feel of looking at my mirror.

beautiful... :) liked the anarchy feel...

This is called Rudra Ros in Bengali, I think. But very true. Because, we are in the age of decadence where people lack sense of values as if the evil power has taken hold of us.

Respected Mr. Rick Elpers, firstly I would like to thank you for reading through the humble contribution of mine and penning your valuable comments. Here, I would like to draw your kind attention towards certain points which I had in mind while penning the above lines. Sir, my objective of writing the poem is to make ourselves aware that human beings themselves are transforming into evil forces, or to be precise, the devil and inviting the gradual decline of mankind and destruction to this beautiful world. We have been indulging in warfare, hatred against each other, going for harmful experiments which are detrimental to nature, polluting the environment and so on and so forth, which we really cannot ignore. The beautiful nature has started shedding its tears due to this gradual devastation and we fear the end of this world. That's where I would like to draw the attention. Sir, if you read my other works, they have also covered the pure and delicate feelings of romance, positivity, love etc. and I do not deny those at all. Here, this was written on a totally different angle which I personally feel couldn't be ignored. Thank you once again. With deep regards, Indranil

I find this disturbing. Certainly powerful. Your talent is clear. But I don't like the content, sorry. I have a tendency toward god and the beauty of His influence, even when pain is all there is. I know He is there walking, protecting, loving. Please keep writing, you are on your way to becoming a well versed poet.

My God! What expressions of the slow destruction of this world initiatied by mankind under the veil of the evil. Mindblowing!