Friday, April 3, 2009

Haunted....To The Dark World....Iam..... Comments

Rating: 4.8

Long night mysteries surrounds me
still I can hear whispers following me
when sun sets and dark clouds covers on
I go insane
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Miriam Maia Padua 08 April 2009

very expressive, ..intriguing..interesting the thoughts are so impressive the words are definitely giving one whole picture of what you feel.. very convincing, Sebastine.... Who's pulling you into the dark world huh? the thief? where's the police to help you out? ..lol You are a jolly guy...it's easy for you to come out... with your words.....you can come out from that dark world... really a great write.10+++++++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 08 April 2009

you described the feeling of schizophrenics who hears the voice of the people in absence of them...........known as auditory hallucination.........Good write.........hair raising write........10+++............

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Naidz Ladia 04 April 2009

this is designed with beautiful and expressive words.., the subject is asking a help to pull him out from this darkworld...he needs to be comforted...honey dear, don't you have trust in yourself? ...you are a very strong asset and a powerful subject..you can pull out yourself from the darkworld that are chasing and counquering you..don't let darkness governs your life..but don't worry, everything would be fine bleee....take care, , , miss your smiles sweet childish man..lav ya always.. naizz

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Winnie Angel 03 April 2009

Hey baby who is pulling u into that dark world.....quite disturbed huh! ....dont let urself run into...come out...hey hold my iron hand surely to pull u out......promise if u are not in fire..Winnie

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