Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Haunted Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the ice-cold stone of your guarded heart
Lies a piece of me,
Caught up in barbs.
A piece that beats with forgotten cost-
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Lesa MRK
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Patricia Gale 26 July 2006

Have the soveingner from that place, tried to burn it but it came back... splendid write of a love gone!

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Ruby Root 20 July 2006

Hi Lesa, It sound like you were in love. I think for me I fell out of love years ago. I really can't say. I can't even write poetry lately. I find it hard to come on the site. I am just losing interest in everything. Take care Excellent poem.

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Guarded Heart 19 July 2006

I love it, obviously, i mean its my name sake. the heart is so fragile a thing and this is a good tribute to it. In Awe, Heart

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Anastasia Prescott 19 July 2006

Very touching... emotions expressed beautifully

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